Well, this is page 48 of 52 for this chapter. The next chapter is completely scripted out except for the end, and by that I mean I'm happy enough with the script to start sketching with it, and if the sketching for reworked Chapter 1 is any indication, sketching will result in a small to large portion of the chapter being rewritten. I guess I might just need to be able to draw things out to write them?
Reply to Anonymous:
Thanks, I'm glad you appreciate it. :) I haven't been doing the greatest at it lately, but I will do my best to keep pages and incentives updated. And it's been a while since I've drawn miren, so that's a definite possibility for next week. ;) Feel free to suggest incentive ideas, by the way. I usually forget about them and end up looking for something random on my computer I haven't used yet.