Ch1 pg4

January 16th, 2009, 1:18 pm



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Yubria, January 17th, 2009, 3:25 pm     Reply

bad dog...

eh, now some of the shading looks weird cuz of how i saved it... oh well. i still think it looks (slightly) better this way instead of jpeg... maybe. anyways, i finally decided to ink my pages digitally, simply b/c it gives me more freedom to change it around...

voting time! what do you think will happen to the dog???? and also, what is the dog's owner (Reanin) doing/going to do????? we'll find out next week! (but seriously, i want to know what you think!!)

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Theorah, January 17th, 2009, 3:50 pm     Reply

Nice page layout, I like how the interruption of the dog is visually shown to really be an interruption (with all those panels surrounding the 'brak!' panel!
I dont think the centor will do anything, he seems to majestic to do anything bad to the dog (!) but I think Reanin will think otherwise ;)

Sedna (Guest), January 18th, 2009, 12:38 pm     Reply

The first panel with the dog, kinda adds a jump to the whole page. lookin' good!

Yubria, January 23rd, 2009, 7:50 pm     Reply

i think the centor will crush the dog and make a rug out of it (b/c it mist the bear!)


chikyuutenshi, March 18th, 2010, 2:25 pm     Reply

It's beautiful Yubria (it's me Jbailuk btw) :) love the comic thus far ^^

AlpineBob (Guest), July 14th, 2011, 3:27 am     Reply

I had to read it a few times to be sure he hadn't accidentally shot the dog. It's perfectly clear that he's glancing back at the distraction, but the fact that the arrow is shooting towards the first panel comfused simpleton me for a bit. The jagged star-burst panel border is a great touch.

My estimate:
He's annoyed, but grumbling, not reaching for another arrow...

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