don't try this at home, kids- this guy is a TRAINED PROFESSONAL.
and look, YoshikoFuru and Sweetyluli- perspective and motion lines in an action shot!! i'm actually applying what you're trying to teach me in comic class!! :D
lol those are funny sounding words, Jedigal! he's called an Aratian.
and Theorah- i don't know if you know this, but out here we have what fishermen call "nightcrawlers"; basically worms. XD so i googled the word, and about the only thing that came up was a Marvel(or DC- not sure which) superhero alien looking thing, so i assume that's who you meant? odd, isn't it, that with how much i love the American comic art style, i've never read one of their comic books, or even watched all of a movie based off one? (saw most of Spiderman while babysitting a couple weeks ago, but he got bored during the climax and i couldn't finish it. that's a 3 y/o for ya).
and one last thing- i re-uploaded Ch1 pg1. due to recent plot changes (it's not official until it's uploaded on a page- and even then...) Unknown's magic is now yellow.
great last panel, you can really feel him swooping down, very nice!!
wow thats interesting, I never knew you could get worms called 'nightcrawlers' XD
yes, I meant the X-men character, or more specifically, the x-men evolution version (hes super cool!): http://www.stevenegordon.com/character_design/images/char_design_01_11p09.jpg
I'm surprised you hant read any comics like thst, although thats kind of nice, because it means your influences in story telling are a bit different :D