Ch1 pg18

April 18th, 2009, 10:36 am



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Yubria, April 18th, 2009, 10:44 am     Reply

aaaaaalllll righty here... a quick note- if you'd like to see any of the artwork i've been working on over the last few weeks, go check out the home page.

so! we have our first female character appearance! unfortunately, this lovely lady doesn't have a name- she is merely known affectionately as 'Frazzle', and i think you might be able to tell why. :) i'm very pleased with how the character shading came out, and kinda wish i put more effort into the backround, and now some of the dialogue isn't sounding that great. oh well.

and thank you again, Theorah- it's always nice to hear your comments. i suppose i'm operating on the theory that if the world feels real to the author, it will hopefully convey the same feel to the reader.

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Theorah, April 19th, 2009, 4:04 pm     Reply

hehe shes so receptionisty! XD I quite like the dialogue, its funny and natural sounding, their conversation was my favorite part of this page. What an organized place, Im surprised! It must be a very well kept city! 0_0

KtMcG, April 24th, 2009, 2:29 pm     Reply

lil sis
ok kr, so you said you want me to say what i think on here right? well fine. it looks good like always and i like the people as always and i like EVERYthing as always. what more do you want me to say??

i love Frazzle's eyes in the 7th panel. it looks like there starting to glow or something. and i like the way she look in the 5th panel b/c it looks like she thinking "Oh no! not another one of these guys!"

kelpiehunterkai (Guest), December 28th, 2009, 7:59 pm     Reply

I love Ivar's expression in that last pannel!

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