aaaaaaaaaand this is the last of the main characters! yay! and she's also the original main character in the first stages of planning, but has since underwent the biggest personality change of them all. (i think Iavar gets the prize for staying most the same.) and yeah. let's just stick in a random floating panel on the side to show they're fighting. :P
i thought of at least two other ways to intro Ori, Nic, and Kydi, (Diogo and Jovan just get in there b/c they need intros and it fit) but this way was by far the funnest for me to do and probably the easiest for you guys to get to know the characters. and Sed- i get the sunburned part, but how in the world does Mr Harmon fit in there????? (i literally lol'ed by the way)
oooh! she looks grumpy! XD I cant tell if shes just sensible or if shes not a nice person, haha only more pages will tell! I also think this is a nicxe way to introduce characters :) I always enjoy it when characters are introduced through mid-action scenes/stories, more fun then the classic 'hi. my name is such and such' narration idea!